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You should write your own messages, introducing yourself and asking for the specific advice you are seeking. See the examples below for inspiration.

CAREER CONVERSATION
Subject: UMass Student Seeking Advice on Careers in Finance
Dear John:
My name is Sam. I am a junior Economics major at UMass Amherst. I am interested in the field of international trade, and I’d love to talk about your career path. I appreciate you signing up as an advisor and hope we can find a time within the next few weeks for a 30-minute career conversation. My résumé is attached so that you can learn more about my background. Thank you in advance for your time and have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
Sam Minuteman

RESUME CRITIQUE
Subject: UMass Alum Seeking Resume Feedback for Advertising Position
Dear Jane:
My name is Sam. I graduated this past May and have just moved to New York. I am hoping to get an entry-level position in an advertising firm. I was excited to find your profile on the Alumni Advisor Network, and I see that you have extensive experience as a recruiter in the advertising industry. Thank you for making yourself available for resume reviews. My resume is attached, and I would love to get your input. Hopefully we can find a time within the next couple of weeks for a 30-minute phone conversation to discuss your recommendations and feedback. Thank you in advance for your time. 

Sincerely,
Sam Minuteman

MOCK INTERVIEW
Subject: UMass Alum Preparing for Non-profit Interview
Dear John:
My name is Sam and I am a 2005 graduate of UMass Amherst. I’ve spent the past 10 years working in pharmaceutical sales and I’m hoping to make a transition into non-profit work. I see that you have held leadership positions at several non-profit organizations. I hope we can find a time in the coming weeks to conduct a mock interview. I’d love your feedback on how I can most effectively present my experience and some guidance on which skills I should highlight. My resume is attached as well as a position description for the Program Director position I’ll be interviewing for next month. Thank you in advance for your time and have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
Sam Minuteman

THANK YOU
Subject: Thank you for your guidance
Dear Jane:
Thank you for taking the time to speak with me about career paths in public health. I learned a great deal about the CDC and our conversation has increased my interest in pursuing a graduate degree in public health policy. I plan to take your advice and follow up with additional alumni for more information about graduate degree programs. Thank you for being part of the Alumni Advisor Network. I truly appreciate the assistance you have provided.
Sincerely,
Sam Minuteman